Hello guysI am an university student in Hong Kong and my name is Andrew.
I am writing a story about my previous love experience as my English homework and I do need your comments
Please feel free to take a look of my story and give me some feedback...
It was 5th Sep, 2012, the third day of my study of my repeat
(It is not guaranteed for students to go to universities in Hong Kong. Once you are not admitted by the university, you can choose to study in the last grade of secondary school again. Students in Hong Kong called it "repeat".)...